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Hmm, just where do I post art, anyway? I guess this will do.
People say they can't see this drawing so well when I show it. I can see it just fine on my computer...so, why don't you try it?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v317/Dekke/Quark.jpg
Any type of comment about it is fine by me! Just remember I'm already aware of these, the things other people have told me about it.
-he looks feminine
-one of his hands are too big
-the buldge where his hand should be in his pocket is too small
-his pants are too tight
-he looks feminine
-he looks feminine
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You know, he kinda looks like a girl?
:p
But seriously, I think it looks good. I can?t draw that well. Well, actually I can but it takes far too long to make it look good cause I draw realistically rather than in cartoon style. I?m talking weeks to make one stupid drawing. I prefer to write but being able to depict my characters the way they look in my head on paper would be nice.
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Lol, smartass.
I know what you mean about taking a long to time to draw something. It used to take me forever, but I've been working on speed as well as anatomy...which I've been teaching myself...I don't have any books ;_; If you can write, does that mean you're good at coming up with plots and such? I'm trying to think up a few original manga's of my own...
and thanks.
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He looks a little like Toboe from Wolf's Rain. I like it. ^^ One thing though, his right foot, considering the perspective and such and where the ground would be, it looks like it's a little too short. Or if the perspective was meant to be looking down slightly, then his knee just needs to be bent a little bit more. Other than that, I really like the pose.
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Heh, nice job, you're the first to notice the whole "right leg" thing...even before I did!
And you know what? I actually may have had Toboe in mind when I was drawing this...I had thoughts for how to draw the clothes I wanted him in, but they looked way too much like Hige's ^^
thanks, ladysilverice.
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It's a good start. There's room to improve, but it's a good start.
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Only problem I see is that the image is a bit harder to see due to the lines being so light...
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the head and neck, it sticks out kind of funny and of course the legs and hand, but its alright. its much better then what i could do. i don't do good on free hand drawing.
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Gemini Wrote:the head and neck, it sticks out kind of funny and of course the legs and hand, but its alright. its much better then what i could do. i don't do good on free hand drawing.
About all I can draw is a damn stick figure or a box figure with a circle head and feet/arms lol...
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Heh, thanks again, guys. Free hand drawing the only way I can produce anything decent...in the art class I had in high school we did assignments where we tried to look at an image and copy it onto a paper...mine never looked anything like the actual thing ^^
Quote:About all I can draw is a damn stick figure or a box figure with a circle head and feet/arms lol...
Hey, sometimes that's what I do when sketching a pose...so you're off to a good start ^^;;