It looks good but in the text promoting weddings/portraits etc. it sounds really weird that you mention your own name so often. J.S. does this, J.S. always does that. It might be better to substitute your name for "I" or "the photographer" or "a good photographer always..." sometimes so that it isn't mentioned so often. This way it comes over as if you feel more special than other photografers (this doesn't sound right but I have no better words, hope you get my point).
Ps, those are some nice racing pictures. I love racing and I'm a big formula one fan. Did you take those yourself aswell and do you ever go to F1 in Indianapolis?
Ps, those are some nice racing pictures. I love racing and I'm a big formula one fan. Did you take those yourself aswell and do you ever go to F1 in Indianapolis?