11-28-2004, 04:33 AM
So far everyone has told me to work on the chapter breaks,
all but one says character indroductions & grammar.
& one gal I let read it said it wasn't nearly as gorey as my oter works & that needed to be fixed
I thank yall for the adivce, & next chance I get (likely Christmas break) I plan to re-work the story.
But, might I ask, did anyone catch the B rate movie or the R.L. Stevenson refferances?
all but one says character indroductions & grammar.
& one gal I let read it said it wasn't nearly as gorey as my oter works & that needed to be fixed
I thank yall for the adivce, & next chance I get (likely Christmas break) I plan to re-work the story.
But, might I ask, did anyone catch the B rate movie or the R.L. Stevenson refferances?
My Soul Brings Tears to Satanic Eyes.
If Max Collins, Matt Skiba, Jimmy Urine, & Mark Phillips had a child it would be one fu*ked up mofo, but 'it' would be the God of music.
As-1D R077's temp homepage: http://www.freewebs.com/as1dr077/index.html
If Max Collins, Matt Skiba, Jimmy Urine, & Mark Phillips had a child it would be one fu*ked up mofo, but 'it' would be the God of music.
As-1D R077's temp homepage: http://www.freewebs.com/as1dr077/index.html