Could I Barrow a Moment of Your Time?

[Batz Kage]

I couldn?t really tell when chapter breaks were but rather than use time, use the position of the sun (or how light/dark it is out side) so you can elaborate on the setting as well in the same entry. Like a lunchtime we know it?s some where around noon, but later on don?t really know what time it is.

Yeah, that's mostly due to the fact that I got a little lasy while writing ; same reason I usually try to stay awafrom any writing in which thestory's plot deals with years. Which is also kind of the reason I don't work well with adventure type stuff; writing out small maps has never been my fancy & I personally only describe north south, southeast & the sort just as that.

I know I have some honing to do I guess I just have to put my mind to it; for a long while I wanted to write stuff & get published at least as a part time thing & then when I read Lotus Rose's book & learned how many copies he'd sold, I knew I could do it, but at the same time I kinda slacked off on making quaility stuff, which is also when I changed over to plotless horror.