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Could I Barrow a Moment of Your Time?
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all advice is welcome & you're not the only to point out that it jumps around to much; only the other person who pointed that out thought that Henry was the only survivur -_-...

And that's not really the end, but yet it is; I mean there's more to it, but it's very little & written in another story. But, it was done that way because it was based around the Evil Dead ending, which is based on Shakespears' (sp?) idea of a tragedy. Ok, bad spelling over with, I need sleep now Tongue

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Could I Barrow a Moment of Your Time? - by Batz Kage - 11-25-2004, 11:52 PM
Could I Barrow a Moment of Your Time? - by rav96 - 11-26-2004, 12:41 AM
Could I Barrow a Moment of Your Time? - by Blight - 11-26-2004, 07:11 PM
Could I Barrow a Moment of Your Time? - by Blight - 11-26-2004, 11:37 AM

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