04-04-2003, 08:37 PM
Ok, I'll have to copy & paste your post so that I'll have it around next time I start to write.
The main char wasn't really explained much because I wrote the story mainly for my friends & when they ask I just show them the cover to FF:U & point to Kaze the Black Wind, but I'l try to fix that problem.
And about an intro, although this isn't my most successful attempt, I'm trying to give away the setting at certain points in the story, like the conversation between Kaze & Kyoku, which wasn't posted. In that they start to explain what is, or atleast has been going on. Plus as it stands few may be able to guess what will happen in the end, which I would like to hear a few guess.
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Yay it posts again, before it wouldn't let me post anything.
The main char wasn't really explained much because I wrote the story mainly for my friends & when they ask I just show them the cover to FF:U & point to Kaze the Black Wind, but I'l try to fix that problem.
And about an intro, although this isn't my most successful attempt, I'm trying to give away the setting at certain points in the story, like the conversation between Kaze & Kyoku, which wasn't posted. In that they start to explain what is, or atleast has been going on. Plus as it stands few may be able to guess what will happen in the end, which I would like to hear a few guess.
:twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: Evil Out
Yay it posts again, before it wouldn't let me post anything.
My Soul Brings Tears to Satanic Eyes.
If Max Collins, Matt Skiba, Jimmy Urine, & Mark Phillips had a child it would be one fu*ked up mofo, but 'it' would be the God of music.
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If Max Collins, Matt Skiba, Jimmy Urine, & Mark Phillips had a child it would be one fu*ked up mofo, but 'it' would be the God of music.
As-1D R077's temp homepage: http://www.freewebs.com/as1dr077/index.html