Works of The Kage

[Batz Kage]

I was looking for some opinions from you people, so I decided to add one of my few actually good sets of stories up for you guys to tear at.

For this example I've choosen my Violet series, of which my favorite is part 1 & part 3, even though part 3 didn't turn out to well.

http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/youkaideim...letc1.html

http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/youkaideim...letc2.html

http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/youkaideim...letc3.html

So, tell me what you guys think of them so far. I have them up on my site, but I haven't really revised them, only ran spell check on them.

Thank you for your time, Peace Out.

[sanosuke]

batz dude, i think you may have issues

[Batz Kage]

Ok, did I miss something, or did you? The first story explains people's feeling that they have to be perfect, & says you should be yourself, the second one was written only to lead into the thrid one which originally wasn't part of the stroy, & the thrid one plays on the strength, & true meaning of love, also going into how far people will go to make the people they love happy...

With that information given did you just mistake the stories as an attempt of weridness, or did you even look for a meaning; not to say that your opinion isn't welcome, just saying.

[rav96]

Nice it reflects alot on you personality, issues or not not bad...

ive got a coupla songs and stories ive written not too mention my online Journal.

Now they contain Issues

[Batz Kage]

I have two on-line journals/diarys, which aren't in use that much these days because everyone knows where they are, which doesn't bother me to much, it saves me the breath of having to tell people what I think of them. The only draw back is a lot of people think I'm weird since they read my diary:confused:

[rav96]

Tell me about it esp when the girl you fall head over heels for finds it and then crushes you

faster and harder than yiou can say *Brazilnuts*

PS i'm over that evil BITCH!!!

[sanosuke]

man i wish i had issues...

[rav96]

No you Dont...

TRUST ME

[Batz Kage]

Originally posted by rav96
Tell me about it esp when the girl you fall head over heels for finds it and then crushes you

faster and harder than yiou can say *Brazilnuts*

PS i'm over that evil BITCH!!!

Geez I wish I could say I were crushed by a girl, which I mgiht have been. Does being lead on over 5 times during a friendship only to be drug around behind like a back up plan count? If she were to read this she'd kick my @$$ for me saying that because we don't see eye to eye on this matter.

See, I believe that when she knows I like her so much & she starts telling me how she misses me the most, or & cries when she realizes that she can't talk to me everyday, well, when I hear that, be it my fickle mind, I think H3ll Yeah! Chances are she might like, but then I'm proven wrong.

Geez wemon are so d@mn confusing.:confused:

[rav96]

Women are from Mars and Men from Venus